poetry challenge 3#

07 Apr 2011 1 Comment

by jennasohyounglee in Uncategorized

Guests
When the doorbell ding-dongs
I quickly swish down the stairs
My cousin’s dog is barking like WOOF!!!
Also coming down the stairs with my lead
When the creaks open
We see new guests

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  1. Ms. Kim
    Apr 07, 2011 @ 11:33:18

    Hi Jenna! I love how you wrote that you swish down the stairs! Great way to describe it. Nice poems so far~!! I look forward to reading more!
    –Ms. Kim

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